However, it has one major flaw that will make many women skip over it. Lets look at another bad profile: “I went to school in the east coast, but now I work for a major software company where I work up the corporate ladder. I love hiking, watching baseball, and bbq on weekends.” – the writer must be reminded that this is a dating profile – not a resume or a sales presentation in front of his human resources department. as a rule, you should never start your profile by talking about school or work, as it’s not interesting and not really relevant to what you should be trying to achieve – to catch a woman’s attention.” “I love to have fun, party, dance, and drink of my buddies.
If you wanna hang out sometimes, holler at me…” – unless you are in a fraternity, you should never come across as someone who has nothing else to him but getting drunk and leading a lifestyle devoid of any real goals or ambition.
ideally you shouldn’t be interested in “most” women anyway, but you should be targeting those women with your profile that you believe you will get along and will have a connection – whether you are looking for a short-term dating, a lifetime partnership or anything in between: “About Me: I would hate to bore you by telling you how wonderful I am by attaching to my name a bunch of flattering adjectives.
There is something about the nighttime that I find magic, if you will, which keeps me up working or hanging out aimlessly. I have little patience for flakes and fake people – those who smile while being angry on the inside, as I never know what they keep up their sleeve. About You: You are curious about the world around you.
y fundamental approach to profile writing is to show not tell.
Having spectacular interactivity on your website you show both partners and clients all advantages and capabilities of your business.
Experts are certain this is the better way to engage the web audience.
Now, lets look at an example of a profile that will stand out through both the way they are written and their content.
Some women will think of the writer of the profiles below as weird, but…
I believe that words are cheap, but actions speak much louder, so why bother? It has a strong, unique beginning, interesting content, and a few questions at the end to “help” a woman start her response.
So, why not start with a bad stuff – I am impulsive and restless at times, I can’t kill a fly, I cried twice like a girl when I watched “Notebook,” I cuss too often, and stay up way too late way too often. And what made you weak in your knees from joy and pleasure?
→ My friends call me adventurous/crazy/brave/cheeky etc. (subtext – my friends are important) → My parents used to call me Wonder Woman/a handful/misguided/a child prodigy etc. (subtext – my family is important) → My boss refers to me as the head of all things/the Photoshop wizard/the smooth talker/the selling machine etc. (subtext – my career is important) Choose something that will provide the theme for the rest of your profile.